Art is great, consistent style, lots of detail like the pointer as a dagger, characters could use one or two more expression's, text is readable, could add something to show how to get to save while in game and L in Load is quite far apart compared to other letters. Can definitely feel characteristics through the text. Other than that great start to what could be a great game.
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The start of this story really captured my interest. Very attractive art work. Want to see more! Please post an update someday soon
Art is great, consistent style, lots of detail like the pointer as a dagger, characters could use one or two more expression's, text is readable, could add something to show how to get to save while in game and L in Load is quite far apart compared to other letters. Can definitely feel characteristics through the text. Other than that great start to what could be a great game.